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You ran along the edge of danger, your feet slamming against the ground as you fought to dart ahead.

Faster, faster, and faster you went. Your legs screamed in pain, your lungs aching with the burning need for air.

Your goal lay ahead. A broken and bloodied Loki, fighting for his life against an angry Frost Giant. They both were dangerously close to an Ice Cliff, which no doubt had spikes below it, sharp enough to pierce through anything.

Your hands began moving together, forming intricate patterns as your mind raced for the right spells.

The Frost Giant and Loki rushed closer as you ran. The miles fell behind you as you closed the distance.

Your hands jerked out in front of you, a beam of light erupted from each one of your fingertips as you halted, just feet from the battle.

You watched as the Frost Giant looked at you. Its mouth opened before it stumbled backwards, plummeting below the cliff without a second to make a sound.

You looked from the cliff edge to the nearly defeated Prince, your feet finding the strength to go over to the edge and look over.

There was nothing but darkness below. You couldn't see the Frost Giant.

You turned, a weak smile painted across your lips.


He looked up at you, blood trickling from a wound on his cheek.

"Come here," You ordered lightly. He nodded, too tired to oppose or argue.

His footsteps crunched against the snow lightly, the only sound in a chorus of silence.

"Are you alright?" You reached out your fingers, brushing them against the cut. He winced and coughed, nodding slowly.

"I'm sick of all the violence. Why did you come here, Loki?"

He sighed, his lips opened.

"I don't know."

Your brows furrowed at his response, but quickly darted up in surprise as you felt something cold wrap around your leg.

You suddenly found yourself slammed to the ground, struggling to stay up.

You turned and saw the Frost Giant.

He had held onto something, perhaps a large ice crystal, and made his way back up.

You had been so close to the edge, all he had to do was reach out and grab you.

You were like him an instant later. You felt yourself dragged down, falling. You were falling so fast, you couldn't make a sound.

You felt the cold wind blast against your back, an odd numbness creeping up your spine.

You looked up to see Loki leaning over the edge. Shock was registered on his face as his eyes began flitting around, attempting to find you in the darkness.

You could see him through the darkness, but he could not see you.

You closed your eyes, a tear escaping your eye, floating off your face.

'I protected you,' You thought to yourself.

You felt an immense amount of pain. You looked down to see a pillar of what looked like ice pierced through your stomach.

You smiled once more, not knowing nor caring where the Frost Giant was. You had gotten there just in time, and that was fine with you.

You closed your eyes once more, relaxing for your last slumber, as silence swept throughout the bottom of the cliff.

It's time for sad writings!
Okay, not really. Just one, don't worry.
If you got confused about the ending, it's Loki shouting.
Also, I know this is a little rushed, but I am a tad rushed at the moment.
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animelover2578 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2016  New Deviant
I'm going to go sit in a corner now and cry bye
Magicalnomz Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2016  Hobbyist still in shock......
imafangirl12 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2015
Schoes Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
lol al those Frozen refrences xD

I CANT D; this is so saaaad D; i cant
Potatoe321 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2015
Lol though of frozen when Olaf  walks right into the spike 
Seikori Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2015
oh look i've been impaled
MinecraftGoddesses Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2015
Would you look at that.......huh.......O MY GOD IT HURTS SO BAD!
becdabest20 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2015
Will there be a part 2
jeb4700 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2015
Sorry, I don't think so. Glad you liked it, though! :)
becdabest20 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2015
Imaunikitty Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2015
Delayed reaction much
Tendres14 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2014
So many feels ;-;
becdabest20 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2014
Will there be a part 2
Darklinksminion Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014
I second the motion, make a part 2 but in loki's pov

I want to see more of this!!!!
katiebear13 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You should do a part 2 but in his POV.
SuzyofMidgard Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014
You should make a part two where you wake up in an Asgard healing room :) please?
jeb4700 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014
Sorry, I don't have anything else planned for this. Thanks for the suggestion, though!
ironhidesapprentice Featured By Owner May 26, 2014
Awwww!!! I was hoping you would....durf...;)
jeb4700 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014
The-Dreaming-Poet Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014
It's like you shot an arrow of feels right through my chest...then shot three more for good measure...
jeb4700 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014
SirenzElf Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh nein ! you didn't. That was like.. tear jerking. No joke. THAT HIT ME RIGHT IN DA FEELZ.
jeb4700 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014
Ja, I did. xD
SirenzElf Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
gymleader97 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013
iNSaNiTY-Piano Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013
*gasp* Right in the feels
mystery942 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Why do you like to hurt me in your stories nooooooo

Ehem this was quite amazing as have your other stories
jeb4700 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013
Thank you! <3 I'm glad you like them!
ThisOneIsCrazy Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Bloodycherry7299 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013
THAT. WAS. TOO. SAD!!!!  Bro, you so killed my feels just now! T ^ T
yorucat202 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I can just imagine my last words being "as long as your safe, am happy"
crystal-of-ix Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
it's so sad!!!!
IloveKanameKuran Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013  Student Photographer
Awww! *crying in a corner* this is awesome!
Kimi-theMadHatter Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013
Avengersasemble123 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013
Ohmygerd! Please make more? These are really good!  
Eternal-Violet-Void Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013
mrslokiodinson Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Kidspistol Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013
Aww that's sad! But I like it a lot!
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